Friday Fictioneers: Taking things less serious

Copyright – Randy Mazie
Copyright – Randy Mazie

Charlie was such a character. He took everything literally. Maybe it was his upbringing; when he didn’t do exactly as he was told, his cruel father punished him.

People who knew Charlie spoke differently to him. Nobody ever asked Charlie to ‘kill’ the light, as he might actually shoot it.

The same held true for the detour sign. Most people might read the sign, and then take the road around the area where the sign pointed. Not Charlie. He went straight across the lawn into the light pole. Damn near killed himself.

 

this is my entry into this week’s Friday Fictioneers.

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22 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers: Taking things less serious

  1. You’ve got a good balance of humour and seriousness here. Charlie walking into the pole is funny, but the cruelty of his father gives a sad undercurrent. It works really well.

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